
I found this story rather upsetting, in the beginning of the story the female character talks about the way she feels in relation to body piercings, she doesn't have any intention of getting any and hopes the fad will pass... however... by the end of the story she wakes up in bed, looks down and the first thing she thinks is how beautiful she looks! all because her body is covered in piercings! The male character has completely f**ked with her head, he's messed with her mind and manipulated her way of thinking. He's made her into who and what he wanted her to be, instead of accepting her for who she was. I believe he had no right to change her body without her consent. In my pictures I tried to show the internal struggle going on inside her head (whether she knows it or not). I think she's confused as to who she is, she has been hypnotised and has lost track of her own beliefs, becoming blinded by her boyfriends.










I couldn't think of a short story idea so i looked on the net and found this web site that generates one for you, all you have to do is put in some words then it comes up with a story for you. this is what it came up with for me...

























